R + P Post 9: Our script

When it came to developing our script, we thought it was important that it introduced Craig to the audience and made it immediately apparent who he was. We also thought that it was important that it was a convincing and true to life portrayal of our characters. Therefore, we spent a lot of time nit picking over exact wording and examples given top illustrate points. For instance, at one point the script included a short segment bashing the vanity of instagram, however this was eventually cut from the script due to not being the sort of thing we believed Craig would use to illustrate a point, as well as causing his voice over to last for far too long.

However, in the end of the day, our group has some small qualms with the script, especially with the dialogue and therefore I am sure this script, although deemed final now, will in fact be altered and adapted over time as we see small improvements that can be made.